Friday Funnies: The Passive Voice

[chomiji]

— From Grammarly, citing Rebecca Johnson et seq. on Twitter

If the details of active vs. passive voice are still eluding you, check out supercheesegirl's FG post on Passive Voice.

With apologies for the lateness!

 

Comments

[thistle-chaser.livejournal.com]

Wait, I protest. "Dumbledore died.", an example from the linked post, is active. "Dumbledore died by zombies" works though (and would be one heck of a story).

Still a fun tip though! :)

[chomiji]

Well, in supercheesegirl's post, the brief sentence "Dumbledore died" is actually given as an example of an intransitive sentence: that is, a sentence that can't be put into the passive voice. The author notes that "You can’t make an intransitive sentence passive because there’s no object to flip."

"Dumbledore died by zombies" is not really a valid English sentence because die is an intransitive verb. The usual way to express that idea would be to use a transitive verb such as kill, which can take an object. Therefore you would either have "Dumbledore was killed by zombies" or (to turn it around and make it active) "Zombies killed Dumbledore."

[thistle-chaser.livejournal.com]

Ah! Good point, thanks. I think I read the other post too quickly.

[chomiji]

No worries! It was a big, meaty article that covered a lot of ground, with many examples.

[dark-weezing.livejournal.com]

This was most helpful, as passive voice occasionally trips me up. Thank you.

And zombies make everything better..., or worse. Heh.