ext_114804 ([identity profile] pathology-doc.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] fandom_grammar 2012-04-24 02:15 am (UTC)

Great post!

The deer stood there, three sets of eyes following Henry's every move.

This one definitely requires some context. One might be inclined to think that we have one very special deer, the sort that might guard the Philosopher's Stone.

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